tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-41380482011-04-21T16:42:15.176-07:00My eyes hear what my ears seekurthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17867587203392049754noreply@blogger.comBlogger31100tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4138048.post-894001442003-02-19T17:03:00.000-08:002003-02-19T17:03:16.483-08:005747 <br />"Road Kill" <br /> <br />Grade: B <br /> <br />The "Big" picture (language, character, setting, dialogue, epiphany vs. climax, etc): <br /> <br />You could have put a little more action and intrigue in this story. Perhaps you could have wrote that someone witnessed Joe's actions and started to try to blackmail him. Or have Joe become paranoid and start killing people who he thinks might have witnessed his actions. <br /> <br />The "little" picture (grammer, spelling, physical presentation on the page): <br /> <br />The only problem here was a few misspelled words.<div class="blogger-post-footer"><img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/4138048-89400144?l=hurricanes.blogspot.com' alt='' /></div>kurthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17867587203392049754noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4138048.post-893998572003-02-19T16:57:00.000-08:002003-02-19T16:57:06.023-08:005747 <br />"Road Kill" <br /> <br />Grade: B <br /> <br />The "Big" picture (language, character, setting, dialogue, epiphany vs. climax, etc<div class="blogger-post-footer"><img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/4138048-89399857?l=hurricanes.blogspot.com' alt='' /></div>kurthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17867587203392049754noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4138048.post-893996902003-02-19T16:54:00.000-08:002003-02-19T16:54:16.270-08:005747 <br />"Love and Hate: The Magnetism of Life" <br /> <br />Grade: A <br /> <br />The "Big" picture (language, character, setting, dialogue, epiphany vs. climax, etc): <br /> <br />Overall, I thought this was a good story. I think you could have explained a little more about how you know that your present girlfriend is the one for you and how your present life is right for you, although you did a good job conveying your feelings. <br /> <br />The "little" picture (grammer, spelling, physical presentation on the page): <br /> <br />The spelling and grammer were excellent. <br /> <br /> <br /><div class="blogger-post-footer"><img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/4138048-89399690?l=hurricanes.blogspot.com' alt='' /></div>kurthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17867587203392049754noreply@blogger.com